I’m eloquently narrating my speech prior to your arrival
As I’m flustered
But my words are periodically refined
While my dopamine level is rapidly increasing
I’m fond of this first impression
That is indelible on my mind
You quote your words remarkably
Illustrating this fragile conception
Of love, purpose and fidelity of one’s character
I’m astonished by your authenticity
Have become a fan of your rare insight,
And a keen observer of this ambiguous reality
Monsieur, Let me introduce myself
I’m a procrastinator, an amateur,
An anonymous traveller in this world of misery
But now,
My curiosity had compelled me to knock at your door
And convey this to you at first glance
I ask for nothing,
Not your love or your empathy
It’s just the idea of you that I adore,
I shall be accountable to what I recite
If we were ever to meet each other someday,
Remember this thought of mine-
You are the zeal in my inspiration
And the finest personification of what I write
-Shubhangi Rawat
Beautiful
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Lovely thoughts so well pinned
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Words fail me to even tell you coherently how sophisticated, original, and (yes!) poetic your work is, among many presented in blogs. Thank you.
Could you be able to look up today’s post as it is of Indian heritage in sciences? Comment from someone as articulated as you (I am not being patronising!) would be greatly appreciated.
Joanna
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It’s my immense pleasure to be complimented in such a manner. I’ll surely drop by your post. Thank you 😊
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Seeking A Flame
Lighting Night Moon
Captures Sun Rising 🌌🙌
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Thank you for dropping such a remarkable comment. 😊
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SMiLes Only Reflections
Of Your Remarkable Poem😁
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heheheh
This made me chuckle 🤭
-David
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We all have been in that phase. 😁
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Nice choice of words ✨🖋️ Keep up
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Beautiful
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What a way to express one’s appreciation for the person who inspires us! Beautiful, Shubhi.
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My pleasure 😊
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Touching words!
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Beautiful!
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Establecer esta conexión con quien se encuentra detras de la pantalla, no siempre es lirica, ni locuaz pero es de aventureros acumular osadia para no petrificarse en el intento. Extraordinarios versos.
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A wonderful composition Shubhi! I love the structure and flow which moves along at an unhurried pace allowing the reader to sink into your words. Absent of grandiose words and ornate imagery, it speaks clearly and places the reader within the mind of the speaker. It holds the joy of seeing something that is most often hidden from view. Well done and thoroughly enjoyed!
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Very poetic and nicely penned. Thank you
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My pleasure 😊
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Welcome
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Wow!
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Shubhi, this is a masterful creation. Those last two lines make the most perfect finishing crescendo.
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My pleasure 😊
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Jesus wat een mooi gedicht heb je op mijn email geplaatst, we zijn dicht bij de Kerstmis geboortedag van de Heer of hoe je het noemen (anderen hebben namelijk een ander geloof), moet ieder voor zich weten. Maar Shubhi, jij bent geen amateur meer.
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I’m just a learner who’s scavaging the right words from this world. Thank you for praising me. 😊
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Das Herz der Dinge schlägt in vielem
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Das Herz aller Dinge schlägt in vielem,………
und doch, die ultimative Ohnmacht des Menschen zeigt sich in seinem Unvermögen, dem Licht die notwendige Aufmerksamkeit zu schenken.
Worte bezaubern, aber sie bleiben nur Worte, das Herz aller Dinge ist nur gewaltig im immerwährenden eigenen TUN.
Gut und Böse heben sich nicht gegenseitig auf und um das eine zu begreifen muß das andere gegenwärtig sein.
Die Bewusstseinsbildung befindet sich in den Kinderschuhen und ich glaube, dass sich die Menschheit eher selbst abschafft, als dass sie dazu lernt. Die eigenen Ansichten werden nicht zum Dialog genutzt, sie sind stets das einzig Wahre. Was für eine Arroganz und Selbstüberschätzung.
Das Gleichgewicht bestimmt das ausgewogene Handeln, dort wo eine Seite die Macht im Übermaß umklammert entsteht Zerstörung. Aus alten Geschehnissen werden keine Lehren gezogen. Sie werden nicht mehr gehört und erlaubt.
Zur immer währenden Liebe gehört auch Mut und Kraft. Dafür einzustehen, was für unsere gemeinsame Existenz dienlich ist.
Das Wort „DIENEN“ ist unter diesem Aspekt der wichtigste Baustein. Haben wir die Bescheidenheit als Relikt begraben?
Heilig und unantastbar sind nicht nur die eigenen freien Gedanken, es sind besonders die freien Worte, die alles und jeden erreichen dürfen.
Gott ist in jedem von uns und es liegt an dir und an mir, wieviel Aufmerksamkeit wir ihm schenken.
Herzliche Grüße
Artushof
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Indeed, every word you said is thought provoking. I believe that our purpose is not to just exist and live within our boundaries, it’s more about exploring what’s out there and contributing something relevant in this world.
God is always by our side.
Thank you for dropping such a lovely comment. 😊
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Danke für Ihre Worte,…………
nicht nur da draußen wartet neues, lausche und höre was innen ist.
Frieden in unsere Zeit
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Always looking forward to it.
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Those words really touches my heart. ❤️
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It’s the beauty of the heart to comprehend such words.
Thank you 😊
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Wow ❤️❤️ loved this 🙂
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Oh my God please this is amazing write more
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Always 😊
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The thing is that there is always that one person whom we adore and fantasize about, even though they never know about us. And we fall in love and get indpired by that idea of then in our minds. Beautifully crafted🧡❄
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Sometimes admiration becomes a habit, my friend.
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Yes, indeed.
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Hey shubhangi! Beautiful poetry! And I guess you’re from Uttrakhand 😅, My native place is in Nainital.
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Yes, I am. And I’ve been to that place. Specially to Governor’s House of Uttrakhand and Nainital Lake.
Feels like heaven on Earth. 😊
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😊😊
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Abrazos!!! Feliz Navidad! ________________________________
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Merry Christmas 🤗
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I have a girlfriend in Spain they write me also Feliz Navidad. This is also for the rest of the wordsubscribers.
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Merry Christmas 🤗
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Thanks Shubbi Rawat nice
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Always my pleasure 😊
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Thanks for you reaction.
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It is Butiful.
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like it
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Out of words!
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Fabulous blog
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
😀 ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-! 😀
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I’m astonished by your authenticity
Phew
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Stunning!
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You write so well !
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Good post
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👍
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