What a paradoxical fall!
Here the bleak and blustery nights
Are drenched in this thought
In this charade of a bliss
You carry the attire of deception
Always chanting for an electrifying connection
When your lips touch another
No warmth
Just a never ending emptiness to bear
One after the other
Days passes by,
This elongated silence remains unclear
You realise this now?
When the drops of rain touching your bare hands
Sliding from your palms and falling down
The one you let go
Yet you crave for more
You want love to accept you in different versions
To ignite your tingling temptations
But there’s only a vague attraction
No palpitations,
On the radiant surface
You’ve kept down your wandering desires to subjugate
In this kalaidoscope of superficial fame
Your words are trembling
And there’s no shame to keep them in agony
While your heart is constrained by the walls of insecurities
Every time you’re home
Carrying a weary smile,
You reminisce the euphoria of this passing autumn,
The deciduous pale leaves lying on the veranda
Reminds you of those sentiments that have gone plain
I wish, my dear
For spring to soon knock at your door
Cause only then,
You won’t miss me again
– Shubhangi Rawat
Wonderful piece of writing. I’ve reposted it here: https://grumpysgiftspoetry.org/2020/09/05/autumn-shubhi-rawat/
Full credit given, of course.
Thanks for sharing your writing. 🙂
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Always my pleasure 😊
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Beautiful!
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Autumn is my favourite season 😍💙
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Autumn is beautiful 😊
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Yaaaa❤️
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Superbly written! The artistic turn of phrase and vivid visual images weave a wonderful world of color and thought. We experience the tragic wish for all things to stay new and the reality that they do not. Well done, Shubhi! One of my new favorites!
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Thank you so much 😊
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My pleasure!
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Beautifully written ❤️
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It really awesome 👍
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This has some nice imagery and makes me want fall to get here faster 🙂
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Beautiful meandering of the heart’s yearnings 🙂 We often expect too much of our beloved one when what is really needed is letting go of our own dead leaves.
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Indeed, only then we’ll be able to accept what the future holds for us. 😊
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Oh my, Shubhi….do I need to say anymore? ❤️✨
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Thank you so much 😊
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You’re welcome ✨😊
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So many thoughts here Shubhi and feelings stired. Good job!
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Beautiful!!
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Nicely penned
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Thank you and same to you 😊
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Thank you so much 🙏😊
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Beautiful!
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Beautifully penned
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Beautiful, but sad.
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Indeed, Autumn resembles the sadness within us.
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Wow this is so beautiful and powerful! 😇
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Wonderful post. Beautiful autumn 💛
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Abrazos! 💓💓💓
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Something so beautifully written makes me want to write poetry again.
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Well said!!
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Beautiful poem 👌🏻
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Shubhi, such a beautiful poem! My thoughts as I read it were how sad it is that good intentions may not be enough to revive romance! All the best! Cheryl
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Your writing is just wow…Fall brings out the gloomy in each of us. But its also the Harbinger of spring😀
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Indeed, Autumn is a reminder of spring’s arrival; That you must always keep hope. 😊
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Electrifying connection. ❤️🦋🌀🙏
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Absolutely 😊
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This is excellent! Thank you for sharing.
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Always my pleasure. 😊
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Beautiful post! Autumn is my favorite season! 🙂
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You’re very welcome!
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What a beautiful poem!
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