Maybe I’m a mannequin immersed in this seamless time
Or an ace ahead of many
Living in a monochrome of darkness
I see a gleam of light through the crevice
It’s been a day, a month or an year
I’ve lost count
As I’m shackled to the corner by the heavy harness
I infer through my peripheral vision
Walls rendering dark graffiti
What a race of fellow beings with no ambition
Just cowards who subdue one another;
No righteous, no brave
Sometimes, I’m invisible to them
“A pebble near the shore”
Waiting for the next wave
What’s after this discreet pattern?
In a certain direction,
Where all the mighty sail
Should I take a leap forth?
All my life I’ve been selfish
For inflicting such opinions on me
As where I stand today
In a remote place that is forbidden
To the ones who lack moral integrity
This mind is the abstract of Hades
Looking through the prism of heaven
In here, I’m just a prisoner
And this perplexing thought, is my only warden
-Shubhangi Rawat
some deep thoughts
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Loving your lines….deep thoughts….
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You’re welcome β¨
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You have given me thought that we all are prisoners of life itself. Well done!
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Beautiful imagery. “Looking through the prism of heaven,” you give us a profound vision of where humanity stands today “in a monochrome of darkness.” Thanks for sharing your “gleam of light [seen] through the crevice” β€
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The imagery is bold and deeply introspective. A contemplative piece and fitting our contemporary challenges.
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oh that was awesme and loved that last line.. in all it’s darkness it was hopeful β€οΈ Cindy
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Good!
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Very imaginativeππΌ
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This line: βWalls rendering dark graffitiβ caught me off guard β I loved it.
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Beautiful words… Keep it up..
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Do visit my blog and follow.. Lets stay connectedπ
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Beautiful…
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Deep and disturbing. Touches the emotions.
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Indeed, we all are prisoners of our mind; struggling to adjust our sails with the wild current of emotions.
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Wow. Loved this
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Wow..this is beautiful…dark, intense and Introspective β€οΈβ€οΈ
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That’s life in every shade.
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Wowwww, that’s lovelyπ€π€β€
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Your most welcome
It was a great pleasure π€π€β€β€
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Wow
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Profound.
I am Spirit bound to a dense collection of living and dying cells and organisms. β€οΈπ¦ππβοΈπ¦π±
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We’re made to perceive this world in all forms, but only few of us are able to comprehend its true meaning. π
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Ah, a life worth living. β€οΈπ¦ππ
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Absolutely π
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Beautifulπ
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Beautiful poem!
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So many layers in this piece, ecoπ±
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Reblogged this on worldtraveller70.
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An impressive share, I just given this onto a colleague who was doing a little analysis on this. And he in fact bought me breakfast because I found it for him.. smile. So let me reword that: Thnx for the treat! But yeah Thnkx for spending the time to discuss this, I feel strongly about it and love reading more on this topic. If possible, as you become expertise, would you mind updating your blog with more details? It is highly helpful for me. Big thumb up for this blog post!
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Nice one
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